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A Stirring...



I am,
and I am becoming.

Each day, a stronger stirring,
so much that I almost turned to ask you,
“did you feel that”?

This is not the movement of a single seed,
reaching for the light
to yield a bloom.

This is a field of wildflowers,
spreading past an iris’ dream;
vast, velvet-rich, attar of only-me.

Can it be that the myth of the unseen
hides a self-imposed lie about hiding?

Beauty does not cease
without eyes to gaze upon it.
Opening, it sighs
and knows itself.

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tarirocks
Apr. 15th, 2009 08:46 pm (UTC)
Beauty does not cease
without eyes to gaze upon it.
Opening, it sighs
and knows itself.


DAMN RIGHT.
jennlynn_green
Apr. 15th, 2009 09:14 pm (UTC)
*raises fist to sky* :)
firedancer_ny
Apr. 15th, 2009 09:10 pm (UTC)
I so love your poetry....!
jennlynn_green
Apr. 15th, 2009 09:14 pm (UTC)
Awww...thank you Elizabeth. I have such judgment about my poetry and it's nice to hear that you enjoy it. I really love writing it (when I can get my inner critic to move over) *wink*

I hope you are enjoying your birthday month beautiful dancer!

Love, Jen
(Anonymous)
Apr. 15th, 2009 11:08 pm (UTC)
poetry
This is beautiful work.

Please keep writing.

I would be delighted to be part of a poetry reading with you as one of participants.

May we all dare to dwell in beauty, balance and delight.

Donald
muddyslush
Apr. 16th, 2009 04:43 am (UTC)
Hurrah!
thegreencall
Apr. 21st, 2009 07:46 pm (UTC)
Hey, I must have missed this earlier. Very nice, I like it a lot.
jennlynn_green
Apr. 21st, 2009 07:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks babe...I liked this one too. I missed you this past weekend!
thegreencall
Apr. 21st, 2009 07:51 pm (UTC)
I wish I have could have gone. It sounds like it was a really good time!
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